Creating a 10/10 Resume for a High School Student: Samples and Instructions Included

Opening with a bold promise of a 'perfect' resume for any high school student. — Plain Sales Pitch (20/100)

At 0:00

Calling something 'perfect' right out of the gate sets an unrealistic expectation — it's a classic sales opener.

Why this score: The speaker immediately frames the content as providing the 'perfect' resume, which is a strong, unqualified claim. Resume effectiveness is highly subjective and depends on the specific job, industry, and applicant's unique experiences. This framing oversimplifies a complex process to hook the viewer, implying a one-size-fits-all solution.

Original quote: “This is the perfect resume for a high school student. Now, whether you've never worked before or you do have a little bit of work experience, I'm going to show you how to create the perfect resume just like this one so that you can land a part-time job, an internship, or even your first full-time…”

Sources: High School Resume Examples, Templates, & Guide, 14. 15 Impressive Resume Examples for High School Students, High School Resume - How-To Guide for 2026 [11+ Samples]

Claiming 'nobody teaches you this' to create an exclusive, insider feel. — Loaded Language (45/100)

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The 'nobody teaches you this' line is a classic rhetorical trick to make the information feel exclusive and valuable.

Why this score: By stating 'nobody teaches you this,' the speaker employs a common persuasive technique to elevate their own content and create a sense of urgency or exclusivity. Resume advice is widely available from career counselors, online resources, and educational institutions. This framing implies a secret knowledge only they possess, which isn't necessarily true but makes the viewer feel they're getting privileged information.

Original quote: “Now, nobody teaches you this, but there are five key differences between a basic resume that doesn't get you any interviews or job offers and [music] one that does get you a lot of interviews and job offers.”

Claims 10 years of experience helping thousands via anonymous authority — Anonymous Authority (45/100)

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Claims to have helped 'thousands' without any specific data or proof 📈

Why this score: The speaker uses massive, unverifiable numbers like 'thousands of students' to establish instant credibility. It sounds impressive, but there's no actual metric or verifiable organization mentioned to back up that scale of impact.

Original quote: “Over the last 10 years, I have helped thousands of students to create their first resume that have gotten them their their first job and gone on to open the door for much bigger and brighter career opportunities in the future.”

Categorizes all student templates into two flawed extremes — False Dilemma (40/100)

At 1:15

Says templates are either 'too simple' or 'too cutesy'—ignoring everything in between 🚩

Why this score: They are creating a false dichotomy by claiming there are only two types of bad resumes. It's a rhetorical trap to make their specific 'middle ground' solution seem like the only logical choice.

Original quote: “the first thing we're going to talk about is the template that we're using. Now, most student résé templates are either way too simple looking and they don't look like we put in any effort or they're a little too overly designed and cutesy. We want to land right in the middle.”

Uses the 5-10 second rule to justify 'branding' techniques — Confidence Mismatch (50/100)

At 1:58

Drops a specific '5 to 10 second' stat with massive unearned confidence 🤨

Why this score: They cite a very specific time window to create urgency for their 'branding' advice, but they don't cite the study or source behind that number. It's used to make a subjective strategy feel like an objective necessity.

Original quote: “the second part of the formula is in branding yourself. When someone is looking at our resume for the first time, they're really only looking at it for 5 to 10 seconds before they decide if we're worth a deeper look.”

Suggesting users can copy headlines exactly — subtle pressure to follow a specific formula — Confidence Mismatch (55/100)

At 2:37

Giving 'permission' to copy them exactly is a bit of a sales pitch for their specific method 🚩

Why this score: The speaker is promoting a very specific 'formula' for success, suggesting that using their exact words is an option. It creates a sense of authority around their specific templates without explaining why those specific words work better than others.

Original quote: “So here are a few more example headlines that you can use on your resume as a high school student. Uh you can either take these exactly or just use them as inspiration.”

Claiming paid work is just 'executing instructions' while unpaid work provides the real value — Loaded Language (45/100)

At 3:21

Calling paid work 'just executing instructions' is such a loaded way to describe employment 💀

Why this score: The speaker uses reductive language to diminish the value of paid employment, labeling it as mere 'execution' to make their argument for emphasizing unpaid experience (clubs, volunteering) feel more like a 'secret' or higher-level strategy. It's an emotional play to make the viewer feel like they are missing out on something deeper.

Original quote: “But I want to tell you that is not the best way to do this. Now it is great to have some paid experience but a lot of the times at this phase in our career paid experience is sort of following instructions and just executing frontline responsibilities and where we gain a lot of our really valuable…”

Advocating for descriptive bullet points on resumes — straightforward advice. — No Frame (75/100)

At 4:30

This is solid advice for resume writing; it's about showing impact, not just roles.

Why this score: The speaker is giving practical, widely accepted advice for making resume bullet points more effective by focusing on actions and achievements rather than just titles. No rhetorical tricks here, just good guidance.

Original quote: “doing in each of these situations. So, we wouldn't say something like member of student council. uh we would want to describe what we did and possibly what we accomplished when we were on the student council for example. So a better bullet point might be organized school events for 300 plus…”

Suggesting 1-3 bullet points per experience — practical and reasonable. — No Frame (75/100)

At 4:52

A reasonable guideline for high school students, balancing detail with brevity.

Why this score: This is a sensible recommendation for high school students who might not have extensive experience. It encourages them to provide enough detail without overwhelming the reader, which is a common resume best practice.

Original quote: “Now, for each of your experiences at this phase in your career, it would be great if you had one, two, maybe three nice bullet points describing some of the responsibilities you had and anything you might have accomplished in that job or unpaid experience.”

Highlighting a common resume mistake for high schoolers — setting up a problem to solve. — No Frame (75/100)

At 5:06

Identifies a common oversight, which is a good way to introduce the next tip.

Why this score: The speaker is accurately pointing out a frequent error made by high school students on their resumes. This sets the stage for providing more detailed and effective advice for the education section, which is a standard pedagogical technique.

Original quote: “So, the fourth piece of writing the perfect high school resume is, of course, our education section. Now, a big mistake a lot of high school students make is they'll just have the school and the graduation, expected graduation year, and that's it.”

Advising to add awards, honors, and relevant courses to the education section — good strategy. — No Frame (75/100)

At 5:23

Solid advice for high schoolers to leverage their academic achievements and relevant coursework.

Why this score: This is practical and effective advice. For high school students, their academic achievements and specific coursework can be highly relevant, especially when applying for entry-level jobs or internships that align with those subjects. It helps fill out a resume that might otherwise be sparse.

Original quote: “This is a huge missed opportunity. We are going to add some bullet points underneath our high school education so they can see what we've done there. So any awards or honors you have received. We can also list any relevant courses that we've taken such as if we are applying to a a creative type of…”

Suggesting including group projects with details in the education section — framed as 'golden'. — Loaded Language (45/100)

At 5:46

Calling group projects 'golden' is loaded language, implying universal high value without nuance.

Why this score: While including group projects can be beneficial, especially for demonstrating teamwork and specific skills, framing them as 'golden' uses loaded language to overstate their universal impact. The value of a group project depends heavily on its relevance to the job and the quality of the description, not just its existence. It's a good tip, but the phrasing is a bit much.

Original quote: “Maybe you've done some business classes and you're applying to a business type job. The other thing that we can include in our resume under our education section that employers love to see is describing any group projects. If you had one or two big group projects, take a full bullet point to…”

Claiming 'extra details' like awards, languages, certifications, and hobbies 'separate you from the pack' and 'employers love to see' — confident assertion. — Confidence Mismatch (45/100)

At 6:14

Asserts 'employers love to see' these details and they 'separate you' without evidence of universal preference.

Why this score: While these details can certainly be beneficial, stating definitively that 'employers love to see' them and they 'separate you from the pack' is a confident assertion that lacks specific evidence. Employer preferences vary greatly by industry, role, and individual hiring manager. It's good advice to include relevant details, but the framing overstates their guaranteed impact.

Original quote: “And the final piece of the perfect high school resumeé formula are the extra details that we add that separate you from the pack. So employers love to see things like awards, languages we speak, additional certifications, even hobbies that show”

Broad advice on resume content, framed as universally applicable. — No Frame (75/100)

At 6:30

General advice that's pretty standard for resume building, especially for high schoolers. No real tricks here.

Why this score: The speaker is giving straightforward, common-sense advice about what to include on a high school resume. There's no loaded language or missing context; these are generally accepted good practices. It's not a specific claim to fact-check, but rather a set of recommendations.

Original quote: “languages we speak, additional certifications, even hobbies that show some sort of dedication and commitment. Sometimes this includes things like a CPR certification or completing a course online, maybe winning some kind of school competition, or anything else you're proud of that shows who you are…”

Promoting a 'perfect formula' and free course, framed as essential next steps. — Plain Sales Pitch (45/100)

At 6:49

Calling it a 'perfect formula' is a classic confidence booster to push their own template and course. It's a soft sell.

Why this score: The speaker transitions from general advice to promoting their specific 'perfect high school resume formula,' template, and free course. While the course might be genuinely helpful, framing it as 'perfect' and the natural next step is a common sales technique to build authority and drive engagement with their other content. It's not a lie, but it's definitely a pitch.

Original quote: “Those are the five key pieces of my perfect high school ré formula. If you need a high schoolbased ré template, again, I've linked to that down in the description below. And if you want more free ré writing help, check out my free ré writing course in full here on YouTube. There's a lot of valuable…”